Score: 10

"Wow man"

submission: [Shadow TH - Egg Dealer]-Zero-

date: 13 hours ago

You've improved SO MUCH since I last heard your stuff . . . I know its been a while here too, I had other shit goin on lol.

And if you're only the 9th Shadow song, I wonder what mine was . . . lol

But hey there's not much I can say you can improve on. The detail is perfect, and Shadow's voice proved it. Excellent work brutha.

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Score: 6

"An improvement but not much"

submission: Super Smash Bros Melee themeV2

date: December 1, 2009

Still went too crazy with that one instrument, but I really like the instrument diversity and the more detail. I knew you could get better ^.^

Its still missing a certain something. Drums aren't too big a deal so it's not that . . . I can't quite put my finger on it. The ending was cool though.

Still needs work, but it's still an improvement. Keep at it brutha

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Score: 9

"Awesome!"

submission: Go Hard by Ruff Huff

date: November 30, 2009

Awesome beat. I'd love to hear someone break it down on this. You got the volume levels just right, you got everything almost perfect . . .

All I can say is there's maybe a little too much reverb. But I don't care about that. This is greatness nonetheless. Keep it up brutha.

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Score: 3

"Not bad, not good"

submission: Super Smash Bros Melee themeV1

date: November 30, 2009

You went WAY TOO CRAZY with the main instrument. Try changing the portamento level down a little bit so it doesn't sound so damn bouncy.

This needs a lot more detail. Better instruments, more audible background . . . and it wouldn't hurt to put in drums. That would've helped BIG TIME.

But don't get me wrong . . . I see the potential. I can hear it. You just gotta work on it a little, tweek up your skills, and you'll get better over time. Keep at it

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Score: 9

"Not bad"

submission: [DJP] SM64 Koopa Road Rmx

date: November 27, 2009

It's pretty good. But it's not perfect.

I give you kudos. There's one things that pisses me off more than anything here on Newgrounds, and that's when there's a song on the top 30 all time or weekly top 5, that only has one instrument and one drum. Songs with no detail at all. You my friend have earned a spot in the top 30. You have the perfect amount of detail needed in a REAL song.

The only thing I would change really is the volume control. It's distorted. But I dunno if that was intentional.

Feel free to check out my song too. I'm also in the top 30 at #4.

Score: 10

"Wow. I'm impressed"

submission: dawn of the rising sun

date: November 27, 2009

This is a true techno club song. It's happy, and yet has that piazzaz that a techno song needs.

I'm sorry it hasn't been getting the attention you're asking for. Perhaps you should promote yourself. Not necessarily to the audio forum, unless its in the audio advertisements thread. Try doing something that the Audio portal and Newgrounds will remember.

Great job dude. Tons of potential here. Dont waste it

The XTreme Gamer
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Score: 8

"This one's a bit better than your first one"

submission: In The Middle - DJ Pandaz

date: November 22, 2009

This one's still missing that little something but, you got a cool funky tempo in there. That's pretty unique, and that's essential in songwriting. Continue to work on it and I see you improving very quickly ^.^

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Score: 9

"This isn't bad at all"

submission: °°The Cosmonaut°°

date: November 21, 2009

Well now after listening to this the 8-bit one seems like a funny cool remix.

But here's the detail I was talking about in the last one. That's cool . . . and it sounds kinda russian too so it works for the flash.

Nice work on this

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Score: 5

"I'm sorry, I agree with IIPhase"

submission: °°The 8-bit Cosmonaut°°

date: November 20, 2009

Not with the 8-bit stuff, 8-bit stuff can actually be pretty good, but this lacks the detail. All it is is one instrument and drums. That's hardly a song.

But it's not that bad. Just missing a few things. I see a lot of potential here though, just work on it

Score: 9

"That's pretty cool brutha"

submission: SRB2 Song - Red Volcano Zone 1

date: November 20, 2009

Kinda reminds me of a mix between Megaman, Mario, and DOOM. It's great. I told you, you have potential. This is a major improvement from your last song, and you should be happy.

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